Hows this song I wrote?

Here we are.
Oh, here we are.
Dancing on the edge of the end of the world.
Can't even explain it.
Don't see how to contain it.
We've always dreamed of going to the city.
Oh, we've always dreamed, of never not being busy. Oh-oh..oh..oh..
(Chorus)
Look at me now.
Look at me now.
You call the shots?
This is how's its gonna go down.
Look at me now.
(Verse 2)
We know our way.
Oh, we know our way.
Its a one way ticket to the rest of our lives.
Could this be happening?
Oh man, I think this is happening.
Living our lives like we mean it.
Living our lives, can't you see it?
Oh-oh..oh..oh..oh
(Chorus)
(Bridge)
But dreams fade.
And ride the bus, far away.
What are we to do?
We're just three boys, from the Mid-West. 2x
We'll never make it.
We'll never make it.
We never made it.
And then there comes a time when thoughts start to die.
Well, why the hell not? We gave it a try.
We're just three boys from the Mid-West. 4x (repeat through chorus)

Chorus

Look at me now. (8x)

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Whatdya think?